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Breaking Legs: Much Ado About Nothing | Print |  E-mail
Written by Jeremiah Albers   
Thursday, 10 January 2008

ImageThe program notes for Little Theatre of Norfolk's production of Breaking Legs contain passages in which novice director Malcolm McCutcheon talks about his love for Tom Dulack's script: and where he thanks the board of LTN for allowing the play as part of their season despite its language, violence, and sexual content.  I have to admit I had high expectations for the script.  Years ago, in college, I read a remarkable play by Tom Dulack called Incommunicado, which dealt with the poet Ezra Pound's imprisonment by U.S. forces after World War II for his role as an Axis propagandist.  That play was a revelation.  Breaking Legs is not.  As a matter of fact, as I left LTN on Friday night I was left with one overwhelming question:  Why?

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Why would anyone choose to produce this pointless and sitcomish script?  Why did Mr. Dulack bother to write it?  While I understand that Breaking Legs could not be as powerful or intelligent as Mr. Dulack's script for Incommunicado, I at least expected a compelling story, humorous situations, or some glib one-liners.  None of this ever materialized.  Instead Breaking Legs is a lighthearted mess of a play where the jokes set up the punchlines so methodically they can be seen coming from miles away; and there is no real plot to speak of.

I don't understand Mr. McCutcheon's assertion that this play is too subversive for LTN.  Sure, there are a couple of F-bombs, a "sexy" scene (which is played for laughs), and a pithy and limply staged scene of violence.  But then, I am not sure whether LTN and Mr. McCutcheon have played it safe to appease the subscriber base.  No matter.  The opening night audience seemed to hold the show in very high regard.  I was nonplussed.     

The plot, so far as I can tell, involves a playwright named Terence O'Keefe (Robin Chapman) who has come to see Lou Graziano (Richard May), the mafioso father of Angie (Catherine Gendell), a former student of his with whom he had a brief flirtation.  He has written a play he would like to have produced off-off Broadway, and he believes Lou may be able to bankroll the show.  Lou and his colleagues Mike Francisco (Dale Payne) and Tino De Felice (Augustus Allen II) agree to bankroll the show, but decide to sink more money in it to make it a full-fledged Broadway production.  Terence is pleased with this, and resumes his flirtation with Lou's daughter Angie.  In the middle, a small-time hood named Frankie (Vincent DeSanto) is meted out some underworld justice by the ragtag bunch of lovable mobsters.  Terence witnesses the violence.  We are told he is frightened, but that's not discernable: A man frightened of a mob boss does not take his money, and he certainly doesn't bed his daughter. Terence does though, and agrees to have the mobsters produce his play.

That's pretty much it in a nutshell.  There is no conflict to speak of, and I could not tell you who was the protagonist or who was the antagonist. 

When the play broke for intermission I wasn't sure why I was supposed to want to come back.

When the play broke for intermission I wasn't sure why I was supposed to want to come back.  Nothing had happened.  And nothing happened in the second act either.  Mr. Dulack's script plays more like a series of gangland comedy vignettes than a full-fledged play.  The mobsters are more cute than menacing.  It's like Guys and Dolls  And speaking of Guys and Dolls why did Mr. Dulack work so many dated musical theatre references into the script?  In one of the more tedious moments of the play Terence and the mobsters sit at the banquette in a long actionless scene where the topics of discussion are such dated rialto subjects as Ethel Merman, Ezio Pinza, Sigmund Romberg's The Desert Song, and The Pajama Game.  I began to think Mr. Dulack had challenged himself to write a play where most of the lines contained a musical theatre history lesson.  This is the play that was supposed to be too subversive for presentation here?

Much of the staging seems busy and arbitrary.  Actors enter and seldom stop moving (Ms. Gendell is the worst culprit).  I prayed for a moment of stillness through the first half of Act One.  This didn't arrive until the scene mentioned above, where the stillness lasted too long, and the dialogue did not pop enough to merit such a long period of inactivity.  Too often characters would move from the banquette stage right to a small bistro table stage left for no discernable purpose other than to clarify the stage picture.    By and large, however, he has done an adequate job for a greenhorn director and Mr. McCutcheon should sleep better tonight knowing that the major problems here are largely Mr. Dulack's fault and not his.  I hope Mr. McCutcheon will continue to direct in the future.  More experience may weed out some of these problems. 

The most solidly professional person onstage is Ms. Gendell as Angie, although her almost compulsive blocking and stage business make her seem less experienced than I know her to be.  Her performance of Angie is just right however.  From her accent to her nouveau riche air she is perfect, and

Ms. Gendell herself is a striking and beautiful woman who is believable as either a mobster's daughter or his comare.

Ms. Gendell herself is a striking and beautiful woman who is believable as either a mobster's daughter or his comare.  Mr. Payne is the next best as Mike Francisco.  Sure, he sounds more like Rodney Dangerfield than Michael Corleone, but with material like this it's not necessarily a bad thing.  Mr. Chapman is adequate, but a touch nebbishy (think Richard Dreyfuss), and this is odd since his character is Irish.  The most brilliant moment comes from Mr. DeSanto as Frankie Salvucci.  When he enters the scene he gets the most genuine laugh of the evening.  You know from the second you see him who he is:  a hophead and low-level business associate who's more trouble than he's worth.  His time onstage is brief, and he doesn't sustain the brilliance of his entrance throughout his brief scene, but he has made an interesting choice that, if not wholly successful, is more interesting than much that happens during the course of the evening. 

Matt Gorris's set design is very nice, and well rendered.  The setting of the play is the back room of an Italian restaurant which is rented for private parties, but is largely the place where Mr. Graziano and his associates conduct their affairs.  Mr. Gorris's set seems more like the main dining room than the back room, but this may be because of the presence of two entrances and exits, a door stage left that goes to the kitchen(?), and a set of glass french doors upstage that go to the rest of the restaurant(?).  I was reminded of that old adage that a cowboy never keeps his back to the door.  I feel that mobsters may have a similar philosophy and the set allows an availability of access that belies the characters' natures.  The space is well-used, however, and the set  is very attractive. 

The biggest disappointment here is in David Burton's costumes.  Breaking Legs is set in the mid-1980's, and when dealing with the arriviste criminal element, particularly in such a garish decade for fashion, there is a great opportunity to exploit the really gaudy bearing of the Mafia of that period.  Ms. Gendell's Angie was played just right, but she looked all wrong.  While her outfits implied a sleazy Jersey girl aura, they just as easily could have been tasteful business wear from the actress's own closet.  Where was the gaudy jewelry?  Where were the dresses so short she had to keep pulling them down?  Why wasn't her hair ratted and teased to an insurmountable height?  Why were the mobsters in blase suits the whole time?  Where were the velour track suits?  I understand that these theatres operate on meager budgets, and period is difficult to do on the cheap, but Mr. Burton seems to have completely missed the point.  The costumes for Mr. Payne's Mike Francisco (chest hair, gold chains) come close, although there is more than a hint of the 1970's in them.  It is Mr. DeSanto's Frankie whose leather jacket and turquoise pants combo are the funniest and most period appropriate.  The other characters, much like Ms. Gendell seem to have their sensibility more grounded in the contemporary mob world of The Sopranos than anything having to do with the 1980's, and it is a missed opportunity. 

Well, I think that's it.  I started this review several hours ago, not sure what I was going to say about the show.  Now it appears that (much like the goombahs of Breaking Legs) I have decided to murder it, bury it, and eulogize it in one fell swoop.  But before you air your agita on our comment boards, may I just say that the other members of the audience at Friday night's show were having a much better time than I was.  There, that's it.  The comment board is now open.  Hit me with your best shot.   I think I have the stugots to take it.

 

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Jesus, Jeremiah. I just gave dictionary.com an aneurysm trying to keep up with all that grandiose verbiage. Color me impressed. (No, really. Bust out the Crayolas - I am)
I saw the show as well, and as for your disappointment in Mr. Dulack... well, I can't pretend I thought the script was anything loftier than you did, but I think your expectations were misplaced when you were told something 'subversive' was in store. I believe what was meant by that was the language and subject matter were more risque than is generally offered by the Little Theatre of Norfolk.
And as for being nonplussed (great word, by the way), that's how I felt when you opened with a complaint that the script was too trite and hackneyed, and closed with a complaint that the costumes weren't trite and hackneyed enough.
By and by I felt the show was, although far from the most earth-shaking revelation the art form has offered, still worth my time and an enjoyable evening's light entertainment.

Posted by Nic Thornburg, on 02/21/2008 at 01:40

Hit me with your best shot? Is Jeremiah Albers, the reviewer, really Pat Benataur incognito? Stay tuned, same Bat Time, same Bat Channel. No, really, the script is lame. However, these talented actors made something out of nothing. I laughed. OK, maybe chuckled, but still. Sayonara!

Posted by Jenny Frider, on 01/13/2008 at 22:20

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